Ron Narcisse's Podcast
FOR THE LOVE OF POETRY For years we have felt that poetry should comprise of stanzas made up of words and phrases that rhyme. However this class had given us a greater insight into the formation of poems. We established that poems are used to express ideas and feelings , as well as tell of a story. At the end of the class we were all more confident to create beautiful poetic pieces riddled with carefully formed stanzas and poetic flow. The lecturer had us recreate a cinquain as a class and each of us were given the responsibility to draft our own haiku. But before we did this we had to find out what a cinquain was, as this was a new word in our mental word collection. This was a stanza made up of five lines. Thus we were able to formulate a short cinquain that met the approval of the class. Unaware that poem had varieties, we were introduced to 4 types of poems, which were; ballads. narrative poems, limericks and the haiku. But of interest to us was this newly learnt one; t
Excellently done!! I really love the various sounds used. I felt like I was present at the scene. Your background music was appropiate and assisted with setting the mood for this piece. Wow! This was very impressive.
ReplyDeleteWow!! I love this Ron. I actually visualized the entire piece. The heart was literally racing whilst listening to your piece .
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Nasha John
Wow! What a vivid description! I could envision the mood, tone, ambiance and the different emotions that this writer painted. It almost seemed like I had witnessed this accident. The variety in your inflections and sounds added panache to it.
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Sniff sniff....that's me recovering from my pouring tears...this was emotional because of the vivid picture created which is of course the aim of descriptive writing...great job!
ReplyDeleteTalking about vicarious experiences. Very detailed and great use of onomatopoeia. Your intonation made the scene come to life and it was complemented perfectly with the sound effects. The picture stayed in my mind as you read along. Very effective! Excellent job once more!
ReplyDeleteRyan Bicar.
WOW! Absolutely captivating in every sense of the word. I loved this and I saw what you saw, heard what you heard, and felt what you felt! Bravo Ron, Bravo!
ReplyDeleteRon, you did well with this. I know that your students will be able to visualize, smell and hear exactly what this accident scene was like. The sound effects really had me thinking that it was a movie. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteAbigail
Good job Ron! The poet in the making! Hope you will take on writing seriously.
ReplyDeleteMichele Clercent
Good Job, I was able to create vivid images as I listened to this video.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness! This was amazing. With the way you described the scene, how you felt and also the music to accompany it, I felt like I was there. You are an excellent author and also actor. Great work!
ReplyDeleteLeotha F.
Thx everyone. I really enjoyed creating this piece and I'm glad that you all enjoyed it. Thank you for your encouraging comments.
ReplyDeleteYou did a wonderful job Ron. Yes, I was able to create mental images of this horrific accident. I was even able to smell the gasoline streaming out of the gas tank. As you read, my eyes were shut and I listened to every description while my mind decoded through the use of images.
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ReplyDeleteExcellent Piece Mr. Narcisse! I can actually visualize the accident in my head with all these sound effects!
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Brilliant! What a vivid description, I felt like I was present at the accident scene.Those sound effects really made your piece come alive. Very impressive. Great Job Ron.
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